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ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew hah jk. that was pathetic. but still good effort! if there was ...

wow. uhhh that was a little scattered..... maybe try to bring it together a little more. Spring launched out at them with a series of violent thunder storms. ~Ala spent ...

wow..... that's really good. i'm not sure exactly what your talking about but when i read that poem i LOVED it! I think, like Joce, the ending is really good. ...

hmmmm well this is.....interesting....... i think that....well, no thoughts really.... i guess its a good poem but sorta strange......really strange.....good try though.....

Very nicely written! I too really like this one. I think it makes a really good mental picture, maybe one that's a little different for everyone. -Through the window's glass, ...

the meaning is a little confuzing but thats how i like to write. you have to think about it..... and give it your own personal meaning. to me it means, ...

nice writing. I think it is a little vague to be about the worlds problems. thats such a deep topic it's almost like your being a little too non serious. ...

im not sure that "green wet lawn" fits but i was sorta strapped for ideas

Drip,drop, on my skin Tingly coolness spreading within A day in the rain is the day I like best It gives me a breath, a forgiving rest It splashes, it ...

good job.... :smt001 that was a little weird, but hey, whats new with you twinzies. :smt064 i think next time you might want to try having a subject... oh well ...

That would make an amazing song! -You're moaning like you're really hurting, your tiny heart, you say, it's breaking, we both know that's a lie!- great lyrics! I love your ...

wow. that's actually decent. i totally agree with mark's blanket of snow thing... it sounds too comforting. i think you described her death really well, and, unlike mark i don't ...

wow. that's actually decent. i totally agree with mark's blanket of snow thing... it sounds too comforting. i think you described her death really well, and, unlike mark i don't ...

Yay Mark!!!! Good job. that was pretty cool. Write more!

bammm! :D