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Face to the sky, he let out sardonic laughs. Then he tumbled from the bridge, to avoid all of his gaffes. this was actually the best part for me. knowing ...

joce, this is definately an amazing begining for the sequel to the other book....(un-named) i usually find that the origionals are better than the sequels, but i doubt that is ...

hah niceee... umm that was the most random thing ever, but hey, i guess thats just you... =D keep writing!

That's sweet. I really love how it makes the reader feel the excitement and fear... It makes it very alive. good job gabe!! i really love peices where it's from ...

Thanks everyone!!!

yeah, much like the picture i imagined. thanks. and thankyou everyone for posting, even if it was negitive i'm grateful for all the good suggestions. thanks! -M.J.-

ads dont bother me... i just ignore them. to be tottaly honest i would never have noticed them if you hadn't said something... yeah. so basicly, i wouldn't pay.

I was a little confuzed at first, I had to re-read it a couple of times. After that I liked it pretty well. "sifts from the skulls of the dead" ...

how you use spacing and different placement works really well for this poem. I can almost imagine it being in a native american poem book with wispy drawings and such. ...

hah thanks mark =]

An evening star glistening bright. The sunset fades to blackest night. Flowers close their delicate petals, Capturing all the beauty inside. What has been is no more, Whats to come ...

Cooped up in here-what I call a world of my own, I’m surrounded by the darkness and I’m all alone. Wanting out and to be set free, For there is ...

The calm gentle swells of the evening Turn into towering giants with moon crested edges Then roar into a foaming crash of anger Which bubble out to a clear looking-glass ...

well ive already read this in its origional script.... but im still amazed by it. ok, joce, i would never say this to your face, but your writing is amazing. ...

nice.... =] much like something i would write... check out my poems and reveiw them please!!! -M.J.-