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Re: lost in death
Waiting by your bed-side Waiting for a sign I can't believe what's happened With the hands of time Tears are streaming silently Uncontrollable and free As I pray for your ...
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten-Chapter 2
hey joce, im so excited for this..... i know it's gonna be a really cool book. ok, now for the critique-- this paticular chapter is really confuzing if you haven't ...
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Viva la vida
psshhhh joce, jocelyn.... same thing. =]
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Up!
wow, i've read all the lyrics to your songs... and now i really want to hear how they sound!!!! maybe someday when you're a famous song-writer. keep writing. :smt109
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: Too late
hmmmmmm... i didn't really like this, it sounds like the drama at my school. honestly it sounds like a middle schooler talking about her crush. sorta pathetic. if you've gone ...
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: Hit and Run
uhh question--- isn't what your describing supposed to be an enjoyable experience? ou make it sound like it was torture. maybe it was.
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: The New Yorker cover: humorously satirical, or offensive?
hahahahaha sorry, i find that one funny. =] i think im presidentist against mccain.
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: bananas
wow, nice. =] i like the other one better.
Jul 30, 2008 -
Re: storm
My face pressed up against the glass The branches striking the window I caught a glimpse of lightning at last And whispered a sigh of content My head was whirling ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Electricity Storm
i thought this poem was well written and very thought-out. i love storms of any kind, as long as i'm safe inside. :D yeah um i think the reason i ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: The New Yorker cover: humorously satirical, or offensive?
i totally agree thunderdude.
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: The New Yorker cover: humorously satirical, or offensive?
ok, so to disagree with you Suzanne, I do not beleive that we are mostly a christian country. I wish it were--I'm christian. But i think that it's turning into ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Alone With The Sky
is this really jocelyn ressler?????? i am astounded. for anyone who doesn't know, this is coming from a tomboy. whooo i'm still in shock. joce you never cease to surprise ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Early Nature
Now the sun shines bright in the sky To say hello to a new day. add another descriptive word to the last line. if you read it aloud, i think ...
Jul 25, 2008 -
Re: Summer [rewrite...or revised??]
hey lea, i like this version better than the other one! i thinks it's a liitle cliche, but hey, whats new?? :wink: some of the lines were a bit forced, ...
Jul 25, 2008
