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The story fragment was really too short to get a feel of it, to develop themes, characterisations and plot lines. However, like your other stories (we, my daughter and I, ...

I too am a little confused about the various types of creatures and who are the immortals? I found the idea of an army behind a tree a little unrealistic. ...

My eight year old enjoyed this story. Here are her comments. This was a very touching story. I liked the way Rissa was so kind to the boy when he ...

My 8 year old read and reviewed, under close supervision, the story as follows: I like your description about Luke and Rory, I also thought the description of the dragon ...

My 8 year old loved this story. Here are her comments. I liked this story even though I didn't understand it that much. I liked this story because it used ...