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There's nothing deeper than the superficial outside of this poem. Where's the deeper meaning?

Dear, Mr. Shade, you already know I have some "mer mer mer"s about this. There were parts of it that I really liked, but we already know your strengths as ...

Hey BadlyDrawnLightning, thanks for the review. "Sow" should not be "snow" as it is referring to the female form of a pig. There is a fun comparison to young, fresh, ...

I suppose I don't have much to say, you should already understand that this is a well written and excellent work. I haven't perfected the art of reviewing but I ...

For a certain someone. Contest Entry-"DLZ" Tv on the Radio A Comment you shredded me apart like meat glued the stringy bits back into peace trimmed the fat and told ...

When I read something like this, I recognize the league I play in. I just wanted to let you know of that little factor. Someday I will attempt to critique ...

I love the sudden twist between the second to last and last stanza. It's sort of mopey and then turns vengeful. I would really like it though if you would ...

Hey, this is really good. Some of the dialogue isn't as good as the rest. I really really really like it though. The art is quite good and the idea ...

You are a very good person :)

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This is some stuffs from my human collection of drawing. Help me. I can't tell how it's going. Excuse the roughness of it. It's hard for me to draw people ...

Thanks so much for reviewing, every one :) the ideas of improvement from everyone are quite helpful and perhaps at a later date I will implement them. As much as ...

Thanks so much for reviewing, every one :) the ideas of improvement from everyone are quite helpful and perhaps at a later date I will implement them. As much as ...

I've decided that I could critique this one, because I have what I've already read to compare it to. I hope nobody is reading this beside you, but they are. ...

Let me know what you think. I sketch a lot. These are fairly old. Let me know what you think...I'll give some details about them. Give me some feedback, thanks. ...