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Yes, it gets better, and yes, I will add more. Please review! -Cici Normal Alana’s POV It was the perfect day to start my third year of high school. The ...

Hey, it's Cici again. You've improved alot, but there are still some mistakes. This time we'll go in order of the story. I. Renee yawned, and rolled over. She had, ...

Hi, I'm Cici. I'll be reviewing your work today. :D POV Choice I hope you realize that you're in a third person point of view! It will be much harder ...

This is really great! But, I feel like you need to give more background. If you're planning on it, great.

Starting a novel! How does this look so far? Please help me and give me tips! It was the perfect day to be starting my third year of high school. ...

I've had a lot of people ask my why I love Twilight. Now I have a reason. The answer is not very complicated, but I thought I would tell it ...

Storybook: Shoes I need help finishing this story. Please help me! Shoes The young, tousled dark haired man walked painfully into the operating room. Taking off his worn blue officers’ ...

Ok, so I've been trying to write something for the past couple of weeks, and I can't seem to get into fantasy-fiction, so I decided to try out some realistic-fiction. ...