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Re: Expectations
Expectations I’m the kind of person who expects a lot. No, not from other people. I try to expect as little from other people as I can and praise them ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: Young Love (Edited)
Young Love The airport in Seattle, Washington is extremely large. This may be because of Boeing’s headquarters, which also resides in Seattle, or maybe just because so many people want ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Your Profile Picture
Your Profile Picture (AKA something I'm thinking) You log on To Facebook. Look at the picture That’s been on your profile For months, And decide it isn’t good enough. ‘cause ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Shark Bake
Shark Bake The car swerves down the tiny, winding road near the coast. Green, leafy trees provide a barrier along the street, and a fiery sun shimmers off the water. ...
Jan 28, 2010 -
Re: Not Good Enough
I feel like I'm not good enough to write. Like everyone's better than me. 'Cause when I read theirs I feel what they mean. How they act, what they do, ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Death
I really liked this piece. It asked alot of questions that I myself have asked. Good job! Now, on to the reviewing. The piece itself did not really feel like ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: The Messengers: a blip from the middle
I know I'm not supposed to do this, but I need to let you know: this is a blip from the middle of my book. I decided to write it ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Subject 9
First off, you really need to paragraph. No one will review your work if you don't. Make sure you're spelling is correct and you have new paragraphs when a new ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: The Messengers: 1st Chapter
Hey everyone. This is just the very first little part to my book. It's extremely small, but I would really like a review on it. Please help! ----- Shoot. The ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: The Ice Cream Shop (Part 1 of 2)
Hiya, I'm Cassie. I'll be reviewing your work today. You did a pretty great job, but there are a few things you should work on. Grammar Mistakes I only found ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: I always thought that ...(this game would be nice)
However, as I learned from The Wizard of Oz, some witches are good.
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Life vs. Death
About five minutes ago, I realized something that every single person has to go through ever morning, every single day of their lives. I was bored, so I wrote this: ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Backstroke
Adrenaline. It’s coursing through my blood vessels, and my mind is frozen. All I know is the task at hand, and it seems that’s all I’ve ever known. It happens ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Love Is
Love Is (This is a free verse poem) Love is staying at home to watch a movie because you don't want him spending money on you. Love is letting you ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Parents-Chapter 1
Honestly, I got through the first couple of chapters, and they started swearing. Not good for a story; it's like a first impression. The minute your characters start swearing, people ...
Apr 30, 2009
