cityofdragons

I agree with him. It is too short for a beginning. I'm interested, but I'm not completely hooked. I need more :D. Keep writing your story! I wanna hear more!

I love how you drone on about nonsense. :D I really like the cover. I think it's really cool and elegent. Simple :D. Well I hope you find the perfect ...

Chapter 1: The beginning I woke up in bed, my head throbbing painfully. I was in an odd room that sort of looked like I was in the hospital. I ...

I really liked these! some of them were a little off, but I enjoyed the effort you put into creating the photos. Really great :D Keep up with the photography!

I have to say it was really good, but i got lost through some of it. I need to know more about Cannibals, Enigma, Stolen, etc. Were they in war? ...

I really enjoyed this! I mean I don't feel your unpatrotic or anything. Sometimes I feel the same exact way. We were (and still are) selfish people who just are ...

I'm so jealous. You have a GIFT!!! A true gift! This poem speaks of truth and the grammar is REALLY good! Good job!

This was really deep and I enjoyed it. I totally feel your pain (well sorta) because my step mom has done horrible things to me. I really enjoyed the emotion ...

I am just in love with this poem already. It's sort of awkward, but I like the awkwardness. Keep writing this is absolutely amazing!

In the first sentence i meant to put "I opened one eye" sorry!

I one eye slowly, afraid of what I was going to see. I thought maybe aliens or blue trees would be in Irbis, but turns out, the Irbains looked like ...

I found it really creative that she was related to the Harry Potter characters. I really thought it was cool and enjoyed the diary. Although it's really good, I would ...

Thanks guys! As you know I'm only 12, so it's teaching me more about writing. It's really helping. Thanks again!

I woke up in bed, my head throbbing. Last night was a total blackout. I didn't know whose room I was in. I looked around in a daze and sat ...

Dear Moon, I have waited and waited for my beloved Echo, but nothing has to come. Echo has run away. Forever? Is he watching me or with Shasha, his seperate ...