cityofdragons

As I watch the nightly rain coming down, I couldn't help but to think of you. You as in the person I talked to over the phone every night. As ...

Owl is totally right, and I also like the contrast. If you are still writing more of this, thats cool, but if its finished, that's just WAY too short. Keep ...

I am completely speechless. I wish I could've written something like this, but I don't think I could have put it as perfectly as you did! I really liked it, ...

As I watched the scheduled rain at my dark window, I thought of you. In the bitter silence in my room, I was thinking of you. You as in the ...

I really like these!:D I can sort of tell what the story would be about, but the two covers clashed. One is in reality and one is magical, so I'm ...

We were the last people on Earth. The world ended and women survived. Only the women that were perfect for his expectations. He killed everyone that wasn't a woman. We ...

Your really pretty in a different way. I like your piercings as well. :D I was wondering who photographed it if you were the model. I really like the colors ...

This is really interesting. It gets your mind going and I really enjoyed that. It seemed kind of awkward though, because of the beginning of the next line up on ...

The only thing i felt was wrong with it was that it seemed sort of childish. It didn't flow very nicely too. (I hope I'm not seeming to harsh) I ...

I thought that some of the lines didn;t flow as well as they could, and you spelled or wrong. (ore) You do have a point though and I really enjoyed ...

I want this as my ringtone! :D cute very cute :)

Thanks for the review guys! I came up with it about an hour before I wrote it... So I thought I did pretty good. This could really help me :D

I agree with empresssofttheuniverse. I did however, like the discription and the plot. I need to know more though. I need even more discription hidden in the writing. It was ...

We were the last people on Earth. The world ended and women survived. Only the women that were perfect for his expectations. He killed everyone that wasn't a woman. My ...

This is really cool! I can't wait to see more! I had some trouble reading it though because you had a few typos and said some weird things in it ...