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Re: Purple Lipstick on my Collar (UPDATED 5/15)
woah, i actually read all of this ! you're really really good with description, i really like this :D its super good!
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Cut Locks (chapter 0 - Genesis)
okay, im not a very good crituquer and i found nothing to critique. but woah, this grabbed my attention immediatly. very good , yeah. it doesnt make sense yet bu ...
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Heat
ahh, like everyone said, this was very moving. you are a super good writer, i like it [:
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Bad Girls Need Love Too
i really REALLY like this story. its not all about how sad she is, she always finds a bright sidee. kudos [:
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Cheater (or Confrontation)
this is really like...i cant think of the word. its good ! most defaintly, but it's "rough" kind of. its really good though. kudos [:
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Bad Girls Need Love Too
woah, this is very sad. im glad someone is writing about it. i cant wait to read more [:
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Meet vienna chapter 1 - part 2
CHAPTER 1 - PART 2 I was so nervous; I stepped out of line and walked away as fast as I could. In my rush, I tripped over a cord ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Meet Vienna
CHAPTER 1 - PART 1 Fact : My name is Vienna Kaye Sparks and I love it. People tell me all the time how unique my name is, I know. ...
Apr 9, 2008