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yay ! im loving this. its fantastic [: more more more ! i suck at critiquing, sorry >.

Part 2 Kaylen's heart jumped when she felt Bridget touch her, she looked over at her curiously, thinking about all the fun times they used to have together. They were ...

ahh, wonderful [: cant wait to read moree ! yay :D

ahh, i like it. the internal conflict is good . touching.

awhh, this is absolutely ADORABLEE ! eeek, i love it. [:

personally, i like the OMG. it adds to her personality. because i know its not just how you type because you spell everything else out. i like it. but yeah, ...

Part 1 Kaylen sat at her desk, sliding her calculator in and out of the cover. she leaned back, listening to her teacher drone on about their upcoming EOC (end ...

oh my gosh... oh my gosh! OH MY GOSHH ! i cant believe he would do that >.< that pisses me off! rawrr, but dude. this is a seriously amazing ...

well, dangg. im super glad her dads getting better. it always takes something big to get them to realize it. becauase at first i hated him, but yay [x i ...

oh oh oh MY GOSHH ! i need moree . holy crap ! who is this guy?! im going to marry your story. lmfao ! [x

oh my goshh ! this is amazingg ! reading the rest [: keep it going xD

ohh, i really really like this story. it like definatly grabbed my attention at the beginning. im not good at critiquing so i'm not going to try. but yay [x ...

oh wow...this is really...wow. i mean wow in a good way! most definatly. its just really sad. i think killing the boy might've been a little much, but that might ...

oh my gosh! this made me laugh, gahh, this is amazing. i love how you write about something more different than everyone else. its shows your uniqueness [sp?] cant wait ...

eeeeeeek ! yay taylor [x i mean..sweeney_todd lmfao ! i love youuu. and how come ive never read this? did you write this at school? because i should definatly get ...