chunkycrayons

Thanks everyone for your critiques! Grammar is not my strong point! I'll work on it! All your comments were extremely helpful!

Hey there thanks for the crit! Yeahh I was thinking that as well! I reckon if I re-write it then i'll add in some more character detail

I was lying in the dark alone; the silence my only comfort. I was a prisoner in my mind constantly being reminded of the mess I have caused. My watch ...