chucki666

i really loved this, it showed your emotion, it didn't matter to me if it didnt ryhme or had a rythem, it was still pretty great.

i agree with most of them, i liked it, just add more feeling to it, because it was short it didnt show much, but what you did was pretty great ...

i like this, it was different, and different is always better.

i agree with the people above me, you started out well, keep going :]

uhm, i really like the idea of the plot, you know? its really good. I think its a little over-dramatic. Take your time with the situations that happen, just don't ...

what can i say, i came upon this website one day at school, i read some kids poetry and i fell inlove with reading most your work. I enjoy writing, ...

it was a bit confusing a bit, considering it starts in the first line, then ends in the second, while starting the other one. other than that, i liked it.

i loved this. period.

i really liked this. :]

I promise you I tried to be everything that you wanted me to be. But it wasn't enough. It just wasn't enough. Don't mind choking on cold regrets. I'm already ...

Little doll, all you ever were was my play thing. Broken face, torn ego, your heart has turned to coal. Won't you smile for me once more? and I broke ...