chucki666

delete. i didnt plagiarize.

i liked you poem, very good :] but the last part doesnt do justice to the whole poem.

like most of your comments, i am not a poem critic so i'm not much help either. But, this was amazing, i loved it :]

this should be kept in journal, but i do like it, maybe others woulndt be intrested, but i was, i kneew how you felt and what you thought. It was ...

Overall, the story was alright, it could be better thhough. I agree, you do use Lance way too much. i have to say that "Violet noticed that Lance’s hands slipped ...

unlike the others, i really liked this piece. both original and the new editied one.

i agree with SeraphTree, i didn't like this story. She was too dramatic, not enough realism, and she makes it seem like she's incredibly bitchy all the time, and lust ...

i agree with Stella Thomas , the whole beautiful thing sounds too cliché. I mean she has beauty, but describe it, don't just say it. Otherwise, i thought the story ...

i dont know how to delete.

i ejoyed this, it's really good, although i was a bit confused on what your message was in here, what your trying to say. You have potential, keep on writing. ...

I agree with Icaruss, just too much dialogue, and i skipped most of it, all i got was her boyfriend broke up with her and a matter of minutes her ...

the idea is good, i agree about the rape, i think you should work on it.

I agree, the idea of suicide has beeen done countless of times, but the idea isnt a bad one, atleast i think, just make it more unique, better wording and ...

i loved this, its probably one of my favorite's i've read so far.

I wish you knew the dark nights spent just thinking about you. It hurts in a way that he won't ever know. but at the end of the night, its ...