christy

I see where the relationship could be confusing. I'll be sure to make it clearer and reevaluate my word choice on revision. And add in a bit more action and ...

Thank you for all of your comments! My apologise for the various typos. I swear I don't usually spell United States with a 5 in the middle. Most of the ...

I really liked it. I adore the idea. It's unique and your use of language is brilliant. The imagery is lovely. __Christy