christy

I see where the relationship could be confusing. I'll be sure to make it clearer and reevaluate my word choice on revision. And add in a bit more action and ...

Hola! I'm not really here to nitpick, but I do have suggestions for you to consider in writing further. I'm a character/dialogue kind of person, so this may be an ...

So, this is something I originally wrote because I hadn't written in a ridiculously long time and I kept describing in my head the imagery as I walked home from ...

Heey there! So, you have a wealth of good elements here. The quality of visualization is really good. In a story like this, you have lots of room to go ...

Hey there! First of all, I'd like to say that your style is beautiful. I find this very, very necessary for writing short stories to make up for the lack ...

Hey! First of all, I think you have the solid premise of a story, but it has a lot that you can expand and improve upon. It's a good, honest ...

I found this very easy to read, which is to say nothing dragged on or anything like that. An issue I often find when there's lots of dialogue is that ...

I posted this here about a year ago, but it's edited and been added too. It takes place in southern Alberta, in a fictional town just outside of Calgary. This ...

I'm not much of an expert on poetry, but I love how the entire feel of it can be changed by a few words and make it tragic instead of ...

Right now, I'm reading 'The Boy in the Striped Pajamas' by John Boyne. It's a bit annoying because when people discover that I'm reading it, they feel the need to ...

While I think a few things should definitely be reviewed, I'm interested in seeing Kate and her family fleshed out more. They have the building blocks to being strong characters ...

Thank you for all of your comments! My apologise for the various typos. I swear I don't usually spell United States with a 5 in the middle. Most of the ...

The prologue of my recently named sub-project. For clarification at this point, it's based in Southern Alberta, in a town outside of Calgary. ______ Why was there no air conditioning? ...

This is Christy. Also known as Tim, Maria, Ekr, Lyn-Ker (that's my brother, don't ask >.

I absolutely adore this. It's well-written, I'm intrigued by the charaters (plus, I really like their names), your use of language is colourful and wonderfully executed. I was particularly drawn ...