christine

Life & love Life is for living Love is for giving and evil is hidden everywhere The Heart I see light, and i see dark, that fill the spaces in ...

"Someone tapped on the door of the cave. "Come in," Said Tarina" umm, how does a cave have a door? apart from that little mistake, i think your very (very ...

thanks for your opinion, i appreciate your (sorta) review lol but really thanks

this is my first draft for chapter one of black heart of fire. please review. Not two months have I been working here as the kings' right-hand-man. Well, woman, and ...

awesome poem, i loved the colour description, and especially the ending. very effective. however if your lines run into each other, you need to make sure you dont forget to ...

this is my first draft for chapter one of black heart of fire. please review. Not two months have I been working here as the kings' right-hand-man. Well, woman, and ...

omg the bite me top lol i loved all the little changes you made, like the bit where chinkie snuck out of her closet and such lol it was hilarious

great job, i was feeling really sorry for her and was pretty much like "no why! give her a chance" and such which is really good. i felt like i ...

to be honest the concept of the story seems good, and there is a lot of potential, however it lacks description, what are they seeing, feeling, touching, tasting you know ...

wow i must say that was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!! i cant wait to see what happens! i loved the way you described the race itself, and the last line was very effective. ...

i think your story is very well detailed, but acts more like a i did this then i did that. but otherwise i think its awesome. very detailed in the ...

i love the way you did the "a fortnight earlier" i thought that was cool, seeing as you didnt just skip straight into the story One of them explained. You ...

thanx a lot for the advice, it seems i have a lot to learn. thank you for pointing those out, and yes unfortunately, ive made my plot obvious, so il ...

how do i reply/review a book? im new so i dont really know my way around or which buttons to click thanx

Preface I’ve always felt that there more to me than people would first think, but maybe that’s just the effect death has on you. There was the burst of orange ...