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Re: dirty mirrors
This was sweet but really sad. I love it!
Jun 1, 2007 -
Re: First Day As A Widow
Different, this was very different. I like it!
Jun 1, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad" chapter 4
Longer than the last chapter, but still short. I hope the next chapter is from Corrie's POV. I really enjoy reading about each different person, because they're all so different.
May 31, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad" chapter 3
Again, great. But I would like more to read. I hope chapter four is a bit longer!
May 31, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad" Chapter 2
Short but Sweet. I love it how you're writing each chapter through a different person. Off to read chapter three.
May 31, 2007 -
Re: Oh, Corrie 1
This was REALLY good. I enjoyed it a lot. It slowed down after the prolouge, and you conveyed the emotions really well. I'm going to go and read the next ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad" prologue
OK, I think how you wrote was good, but it seemed quite fast. I wasn't really sure of what was going on, or is it just me? I'll go and ...
May 31, 2007