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I just finished it. I decided to read some Agatha Christie after seeing a sow about her, and got a book with three of her books (Murder on the Orient ...

That's really cool. I'm terrible at critiquing art, but I really liked the blue circles. It was a bit hard to read the writing. Maybe you should make it white ...

I finsihed Hwo To Be Good by Nick Hornby last night. I'll probably read another one of his books or Mansfield Park today.

Aww... he's so cute. I love dogs... except my own. I really want a golden retreiver. He looks a bit big for a puppy, though. I think the photo would ...

I quite like this, and it would be anice twist if she fell in love with her captor. Stockholm Syndrome, it's called. Let me know if you re-write and post.

This is cute. You're a good drawer... I can only draw trees.

Sounds a bit like a sci-fi set on earth where Anybody smart is made to create giant weapons that are used to fight other planets. How I See The World

The Gate of Glendon came about because I really wanted to try fantasy, and it seemed easy enough with this plot (unfortunately, probably very cliched as well!). For How I ...

Well, I know nothing about art, so I'll just tell you what I think. I really like the colour, it starts with t, if I remember correctly. But I don't ...

I tried to get my first novel published, but I didn't really have much experience and I was doing everything wrong. I don't think you should. Have a few practise ...

I realize that being very critical of your own work is a crucial part of being a good writer, is doubting the fact that you should keep writing a good ...

I don't see anything wrong with using swearing in dialouge. I swear, almost al of my friends swear. It's a common and normal thing to do, although it may not ...

I don't think I could do another one right now, but I m looking forward to November so I can do another one. I just need to come up with ...

Maybe a Romance, or perhaps a troubled life. If it wasn't a romance I'd probably buy it. I do quite like the title. The Gate of Glendon

Finished it last night, absolutely loathed it! I was completely confused, and the ending told us almost nothing! I found it totally unrealistic and it made me want to throw ...