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Haha! Loved the story. Not the kind of thing I would have done, but I have always wanted a time machine. And they were so amazed when the bell went, ...

I liked it, and the italics. The idea of the bench is so... oh, I don't know how to explain it. I guess the best word would be original. The ...

Thanks for the comments. I'll fix it up as soon as I get enough time!

That's a good idea. I'll definetley have to try it soon. I do have quite a big family in my current novel, I should use it!

That's a really interesting idea. I'll definetely try it out some time!

Whenever I'm excited about an idea I just have to discuss it with my mum. And I always show her my writing. She doesn't read loads, and never writes, but ...

Set yourself goals about how much you write. Like, I try to write one page each day. More than often I find that I'm so into the story that I ...

Hey. I see you haven't reviewed anything yet. You should probably go and review a couple of pieces before posting anything else. As for the writing, first of all, you ...

It was good. I went through a phase a couple of years ago where I was obessesed with Ancient Egypt, and because of that I know a lot about it, ...

Ahh... what would this world be without random things? Boring, that;s what the world would be without random things. Very, very boring.

Wow! That was... amazing. Your descriptions are really good, it was very easy to picture the dentist. This madde me sit there, transfixed on what I was reading. Your writing ...

I liked it. At the beginning, you have a girl who I at first assumed was a pesant, and the 'council', who I assumed were like royalty in the world. ...

When everyone tells you that you talk too much, you take notice and work to fix that. That’s what people used to say to me. Now they don’t say anything ...

I'm taking a break with this novel. For the rest of October I'll be wroking on the first book in my childrens fantasy series, November is dedicated to NaNoWriMo, and ...

Well, I wasn't going to read this at first but then I changed my mind. This is... different. I'm not saying it's bad, I liked it, but it's definetely not ...