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I'm no good at lyrics, but I liked these. It wasn't too cliche, and the actual words were really nice. The only thing I can complain about was I had ...

Hey, that's like my mum. She reads all my stuff and gives me comments, usually before I post it here. But, aww... I don't feel like doing the vacumming. I ...

That is so low. Go the girls for giving him a hard time!

Well I hope you get editor in cheif. That would be a great compliment. I thrive on compliments, which means it's good that my English teacher and family think my ...

Wow! Your teacher sounds horrible I hope it's better now. Can you give me some of those excuses so I can use them in maths and sport?

Nice. I know you said you didn't need me to review anything of yours, but I would feel really guilty if I didn't. This is cool. Your teacher sounds great. ...

Well, this is certainly a different type of story. I liked the plot line and the way you wrote it, but I don't think the extremely short sentences work all ...

I haven't seen it but I've heard If You Were Gay. It is such a funny song!!!

Literally minutes ago, I finished writing my novel. Its only a short novel of about 10'000 words, but it was really exciting. It's the first draft of the first novel ...

My fingers twitched as I turned the doorknob. I was only going into my room, like I did everyday after school, and I had no idea why I was so ...

Haha! That was sooooooooooo funny!!!!!!!!!!

This was really good. I don't read sci-fi or anythin, so I have no complaints about the plot or anything. I really liked it. Is there more up? I'll go ...

Well good luck. I hope you don't stop half-way, I know I've done that millions of times. Haviong it all plotted out makes it a lot easier. Hope to see ...

Hey. This is really creepy. Like, really creepy. The night was still- quiet. "To quiet if you ask me." The girl muttered to herself as she walked the lonely night. ...

Yeah, this belong in Other Fiction, not in Welcome, but as I can't move it, I'll just get on with a review. I really like this story. It's just the ...