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I didn't like this. First of all, it was very hard to read because it was ingle-spaced, and then you were missing so much description, that I didn't know who ...

Haha! That was really funny. I couldn't find any mistakes, but there were a couple of bits that bugged me a bit. trying to get her to shut up and ...

This was nice. Peaceful. The writing flowed well and it was very descriptive. There wasn't any mistakes, but it did get a bit boring in the end. Nothing happened. There ...

Cool story. I love reading about the Second World War, anything about it. This story was really great. The characters were well developed and interesting, and the plot was, well, ...

It's really annoying living in Australia because we won't get series three or anything until like, June. It's hell. But I watched Torchwood and the Sarah Jane Adventures on Youtube, ...

It's not fair! They hatched! I didn't get to click on them! *cries at the unfairness and meaness of the dragons for hatching before I had a chance to click ...

I liked it. The imagery was nice, and there was an innocence. As if the speaker was young, and didn't quite know what was going on. I definetely liked it.

Nice, I liked it. But there was one line I didn't get- rumble in the ribcage This line doesn't seem to go with the rest of it. Apart from that ...

I really liked the first one. The brigt colours and the bluriness made it look really cool. I wasn't so keen on the second one, but that's just my personal ...

I liked it. The black and white added a really nice touch, and the bit of light in the corner makes it really... scary. Your niece looks older than seven, ...

I liked the focus, kind of movie like. But... why a photo of a pair of shoes? I don't get it. 8/10.

That's really beautiful. I wish I could draw like that. The eyes seem a little... disperportioned. Like she has a lazy eye or something. Overall, I really liked it, now ...

Umm... I didn't get it. It looks as if he's stepping out of a fire very awkrawdly, and is he holding something in his hand? It just looks as if ...

The first one is funny. The lips are like, huge! And the colours used were really bold and vibrant. The second one looked like a Disney princess. I don't know ...

I really liked this poem. It was so sweet and sad. The descriptions and memorie type things were really good. is like calculating the frequency Shouldn't it be, Is like ...