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I can sometimes read non double-spaced writing on here, but not today. Please fix this up, it's very painful on the eyes.

This was very well done. I liked the comparisons between Reese (I love that name!) and Sebastian. Reese's litter rant about 'humans' near the end was really cool, but I ...

Thank you for finally posting this! You don't know how long I've been waiting (actually, you do. It's ever since you posted part 12). I really liked it. M is ...

Okay, this was quite good. Not the greatest, but quite good. I didn't really understand the end. Isn't she who she says she is? I didn't get it. Your description ...

I didn't really think it was emo. And even if it wa,s I don't have a problem with emo poetry. It's what I tend to write, anyway. I can't say ...

Aww... that was really sweet. For some reason I never see poems about parents, and you pulled it off really nicely. you prick them once and once again. you prick ...

Haha! Funny poems! Love 'em, but I don't see enough. If the bowl does chance to tip, If the soup from it does slip, Make a puddle on the floor, ...

This was sweet. The depressing love poem thing, nah. I'm not into that. But this was differnet somehow. seemes seems dam(m/n)ed damned Apart from those two words, there didn't seem ...

Okay, I can't give you my top ten, but I'll suffle and give you the first ten. 1. Untouched- The Veronicas 2. Mokingbird- Eminem 3. Mercy On Me- Christina Aguilera ...

Nice. I really liked it. I just think that there could be a bit more emotion, I didn't really feel sorry for the girl. But if it's supposed to be ...

It's been a while. I hope you're better and ready to post 13. I really want to read it, your story has me hooked!

Nice. I'm assuming there's more coming, it doesn't seem quite finsihed to me. I think you need more description. You didn't say much about where they were, so I was ...

Cool. I loved the pipe-thingo in her mouth. It made her look so... evil. And so did the scarf thing. The only thing that stopped her from looking like a ...

Nice. Your description were nice, the only thing I can complain about was the length (but you did say there was more coming, so I don't need to worry). remanned ...

That was very good. It was sort of horroh, but sort of not, if you get what I mean. The only complaint is that there wasn't much description or emotion. ...