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I didn't really like this. I couldn't hear any tune and it just didn't flow very well. You've made some of the lines very awkward. Take this one, for example: ...

Hey. I'm really sorry if this happened to you. I don't think this flowed very well. I couldn't get the feel for any rhythm, and I feel the letter really ...

Well, I'll do my best with this but it's been a while since I critiqued, and a very long time since I did a script. There's just one thing I’d ...

I don't blame you for not wanting to read it. I read it for the hell of it and it was a couple of days completely wasted. It's a terrible ...

Estimating about 200. And that's just normal books, not stuff for school or my Japanese books or anything like that. I really need more, but I can't afford them.

I read these books a couple of weeks ago on the recommendation of a friend. At first I didn't think I'd like them very much, me not being a huge ...

Before I joined, I'd always known I was a writer, but I didn't realise that I wasn't a very good one until people here kindly pointed out to me that ...

Sounds interesting. I think I'd prefer the first part to the second, but most people would probably be the opposite to me. That's not a reflection on the story, it's ...

Because I'm bored: :twisted: and evil. Mwahahahahaha!!!!!!

Congrats Jared! I was trying really hard to get it, but I had to go back to school two weeks into the month and I just didn't have any energy ...

Well, I'm going to be a little more critical than the people above me. I couldn't put a tune to this. It's something I always stress with lyrics. If I ...

Are you new to this songwriting thing? Because this was pretty good. Simple, yes, and a little hard to sing at times, but overall it's a very good job. The ...

I might do it, but I could be asleep. What about the timezones?

A 12-year-old girl was left without food or water to die in the backyard of her foster home, delirious with pain and unable to move, a court has heard. Crown ...

7 weeks and 2 days left, then two week holidays!!! Nah, I don't really mind school. When I complain about it, it's more the 6:15 morning I'm complaining about. Or ...