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1. Remember= Happiness is more important than Writing This is really the reason I left. I was getting relly depressed for many reasons, but the constant being locked in my ...

Sounds very interesting. I'd love to read it.

I sent something to a ublisher about a year ago. Only after I sent it did I realise it was rubbish. It was boring, there was too much dialouge, nothing ...

Many of you will probably remember that a while ago I sort of left the site. This was because I'd been very unhappy and just needed a break really. But ...

Hey everyone, The past few weeks I haven't been feeling so great. Not sick, just depressed and bored. I'm going to be taking a break from YWS for a bit. ...

Lillian; Human "Child, you hardly have any choice," I sighed. "I can have you hunted down and killed. It's much easier to just do as I say." The girl looked ...

Is this for fun or something? Or for school? What do you mean by shooting in late winter?

Short, and probably not very good, but I'm bored and needed to write, even though I didn't want to. ------------- Many people love writing, but everybody finds it hard. Even ...

Yay! Singing! I love singing! I love reading about singing! Sorry. I just went a bit crazy then. Now, onto a crit. Is trhis finished? Because it seems more like ...

Yellow was my second too, but we called it Gold. I did Goju. How logn have you been training?

You're back! Cool! Sounds like you had a horrible time, but at least it's all over now! I didn't know you do karate? I used to, but had to give ...

Hi Moo, and welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. If you have any questions or want a critique, just PM me and I'll help. You did NaNoWriMo? ...

Again, short but great. Just one word of advice, I wouldn't recommend just posting and posting and posting. People on here don't like it, and you won't get any reviews. ...

Very nice, very nice indeed. Not much went on, but I just really enjoyed reading this. There was... something about it that I really liked. There weren't any mistakes that ...

Lillian; Human The girl tried and tried to get away from me and see the giant, but I held onto her collar, stopping her from going anywhere. "I thought my ...