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  • Lounge, The Re: Critique the Person Above You!

    The Man and his Sunflower By the way, how do you make the link the title, if that makes sense? Like, not with the actual address.

    Jan 12, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Man and His Sunflower

    Very nice. Your descriptions strike images in your readers heads and there's plenty of emotion, without making the reader want to cry. At first, it was just a little weed. ...

    Jan 12, 2008
  • Research Archives Re: Belief in God

    Well, I just PMed you bac. Remember, if it's not what you want, just tell me.

    Jan 12, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Writing Requirements

    We've all heard of big Hollywood stars needed certain things when staying in hotels, or on tour and stuff like that, but do writers act like that too? Can you ...

    Jan 11, 2008
  • Research Archives Re: Belief in God

    Well, I was born into a Christian family and I go to church every week and get prayed for every night and stuff. I didn't actually become a Christian until ...

    Jan 11, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: names

    When I was young I always wanted to change my name (as every little kid does), so I had this name book and was always looking for unsual names. Some ...

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Archive Re: Laughing Stock

    Carly made a quick stop at the house she shared with a bunch of friends before paying a visit to Savannah's Comedy Club, where she worked as a waitress part ...

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Official Polls Re: What Does YWS Really Stand For?

    You Will Suffer, no question.

    Jan 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Sarah's Toys (school version)

    Argh! That was even creepier! How can yo do this to me? I won't sleep anymore! "Madeline! Where is Madeline? Henry come quick!" Who's Madeline? Again, didn't completely understand the ...

    Jan 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Sarah's Toys

    Eep! Scary. That was really frightening. I won't be able to sleep for nights! I don't have any technical issues to bring up, but I didn't quite understan the last ...

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]

    Hahaha! Thats a 8/10. It's funny... but I don't get it. What the hell is going on? But still, it's brilliant!

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Archive Re: Laughing Stock

    Carly Carly sat down against the wall and grabbed her bottle of water, drinking in between heavy breaths. "You okay?" one of the other girls asked. Carly nodded. "Yeah, just ...

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Man Cuts off his Own Hand and then Microwaves it

    That is so weird.

    Jan 10, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: collaborative writing

    I'd do it. But... what types of things do you write? I'd be willing to try almost anything.

    Jan 9, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Bella.

    She's absolutely adorable JC! I'm sure you'll ake a great mum, and Bella's so lucky. Bella Kaye is a lovely name.

    Jan 9, 2008


Once you have people's attention, you have a greater responsibility to tell them something of value.
— Tobias Forge (Ghost B.C.)