chocoholic

This didn't seem finished to me. You just sort of, left it hanging. There didn't seem to be much structure, a least, nothing I've learnt, and it put me off. ...

This is a songfic using the lyrics of Addicted by Kelly Clarkson. I own the story and character's, but the song belongs to Kelly Clarkson. It's like you're a drug ...

Congrats Suz, it must feel great! I can't wait to buy it! Couple of months, maybe? Haha.

Three, that is so cool! I'm not even close to one! Can I have a title? I like titles.

No way. I despise sport and exercise of any kind, and really all I do is walking. There's the ocassional swim, but I don't go much, so I definetely don't ...

I clicked 1-5 hours, but that's during the school year. Right now I'm on holidays I do hardly any. But during a school week I usually do a lot of ...

Okay, you're killing me here. When do we get part 15? When?

This is truly beautiful. I didn't really like the colour of the panet, but the rings around it were lovely, and I loved the stars. Brilliant picture!

Lyra walked in as Carly started to wipe down the tables, grumbling about something or another. Hey Carly," she muttered. "Where's Savannah?" "Out," Carly said, spinning over to the next ...

Okay, this is obviously unfinsihed. And if it is, it's not a very good ending. Nothing was resolved, and the reader is left thinging, 'what the hell just happened? Nonetheless ...

I listen to a lot of popular stuff. I can write to pretty much anything, but I like stuff that I know all the lyrics to so I can sing ...

Yeah, I'd love to do a co-author, but I've been told I'm hard to work with. I pretty much do anything apart from sci-fi or horror. PM me if you're ...

Oay, this is way better than the first two! Your characters are pretty good, but Ronald was a lot different to what he was, but I prefer him this way. ...

Nice. I don't think I need to go through it line by line because no mistakes or anything jumped out at me. It seemed very casual, and at first that ...

I'm sorry, I couldn't really read it. I sort of skipped bits, but it just didn't draw me in. I just felt... bored. And confused. Does she like this guy ...