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Nice. I liked the first parts, they were very true and exactly what life can be like. But this part: "You're old and boring, you don't understand me!" I've been ...

Carly Carly fell into silence, and almost dropped her phone. "Carly? Carly, are you there?" She opened and closed her mouth a few times before finally answering. "Yeah. Sorry, I ...

Reminds me of the Billy hunder novels. But it could also be very funny. I would so read it. Broken Promises

I would definetely read it, it sounds just like what I read and write. I'd love it if yoou could tell me when you start putting it up, because I'd ...

Easy, I would be a snake. And my deamon was a Snow Leopard.

Carly "Just a new comedian," Carly said, waving off the question. Savannah nodded and checked her watch. Carly closed the book she was recording details in and picked up her ...

Oh, everything. Shoes are so important! And so cute- Charlotte Um... they're just shoes. Who cares?- Annabell I like horse riding. That's all- Pippa ---------- What is the point of ...

21/1/08 Well, I've editing half of Their End of the World, and I'll probably start posting chapters in Febuary. But the thing I relly need to work on is the ...

6/10 It's a cool idea, but I'm just not one for romantic lit. Idea: A teenage girl gets pregnant buts runs away without telling her parents. Eventually she returns home ...

That was really sweet. She sets goals And attains them I float anywhere Just happy to be me This bit didn't work for me. The sound was different from the ...

I don't really count, and it usually depends on how school is and how much I'm writing. Usually I read about five books a week, but I can easily do ...

Mental health issues are very interesting, if you wanted something a bit different. I suffer from depression, although it hasn't been diagnosed, I've done all this research and I have ...

I've never gotten injured horse riding, and I sort of wish I had, because that would mean I could ride more than I do, which isn't much. My little sister ...

Yay! I can't wait till I get to 1000.

So I'll get straight on with a crit, and then give you more general comments, shall I? That afternoon I decided to take a small detour through Chinatown on the ...