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Hi Omar! Welcome to YWS! Well, if you want inspiration you've certainly come to the right place. Everybody here is very nice and helpful, and great writers. What do you ...

I liked it. The descriptions were good, but it was very... modenr. Does that make sense? I mean, a lot of the pieces I read with beautiful images and description ...

Very nice imagery. I couldn't spot any mistakes, but there are a few things I think could be changed. I lie back in my hammock and look up at the ...

Snoink is known for being the author of FREAK.

I tried it again and got up to 1500, which is pretty hard. I wonder i I cn make it to 2000?

Does she have soem terminal illness? Because everybody is going to die. I think this could be really good, as long as you actually finish it. Oh, and the name ...

You fence? I did one lesson at school a few years ago and din't really get it. Is it good? So you're acting as well? Acting is fun. What's the ...

There once was a genius who wrote a book and that book is the book you're reding right now and you'd better keep reading or you'll be forever branded as ...

I got up to 500 and then stopped. I probably could've gone higher, but I was cheating because I used something that I wrote very recently. But it's cool!

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Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

I was very confused. I had no idea what was going on or who these people were. You need to spend some time building up your characters and scene. I ...

I have seen a live show. Obviously, it wasn't live when I watched it, but it was a live show. It was probably the best thing I've seen him do. ...

Last year me and my dad watched The Heist, and since then a range of Derren Brown programs have been showed on TV. For those of you who don't know, ...