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Are you sure you want me to do just chapter six, wisemann210? If you just want that one I'll do it, but don't expect me to get it. If you ...

Livinginfantasy- They have to be less than a month old with at least two gold stars.

There's not a lot I can say, really. I thought it was quite short and it went very fast. I felt like I had started reading, and before I could ...

My and my sister were smacked all the time as little kids and I really don't know where the idea that it makes you violent or depressed or screwed up ...

Well, here's my critique, as promised! I don't know how good it'll be, but I'll try. And I haven't read the other reviews, so I apologise if I repeat anything. ...

This is (obviously) my critique thread. If you would like a critique from me, just post the link here and I'll get to it as soon as I can. But ...

Loose Ends was inspired by a conversation with my mum about humanity's will to survive an fear of death, and how suicide fitted into that.

Yep! It's complicated to explain unless you're actually me. But I'll try. It's about this man who has liver cancer and has to decide whether to die naturally or have ...

This was very strange. I didn't get it. It changed from something that I would probably put in Other of Non-Fiction, to what seemed like the end of a story. ...

This is very... dramatic. I think it would be better if you slowed down and showed us more about what the girl is feeling, because at the moment it's very ...

Well my novel is set mainly in London, but I don't know know anything about London trains. What I pretty much need is just a map with the different lines ...

Yay!!! Lyla's back! Fortunately, I think I got it, although has Cal been mentioned before? I don't remember there being a Cal previously. I should read the rest again. Now, ...

I had something planned, but then I began another novel so I don't know whether I'll be doing NaNo this year. My novel was going to be about a Catholic ...

Sounds fun. I'm in.

Sounds cool, let me know if you write it.