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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Short prologue...

    First of all, if this is set in ancient Rome I woould put it in Historical Fiction instead of Other Fiction. pitch blackness You need to change this. Pitch darkness ...

    Jan 28, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Always Silent

    I was going through my portfolio and finally decided to edit this. Please tell me what you think of it now.

    Jan 28, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Want to write for Squills?

    Can I do a writing and school article? I can PM it to you tomorrow probably.

    Jan 28, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: YWS Radio Is Off The Air

    Hey, we've still got the actual site! But you do so much for this site that we all completely understand if you don't have time to do a weekly radio ...

    Jan 28, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: The writing of chocoholic

    27/1/08 Their End of the World is almost ready! Three more chapters to edit, and I'll post the first chapter on the first of Febuary. I really want to know ...

    Jan 27, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: What is the member above you known for?

    Nate is known for being the creator of the most awsome site in the history of sites!

    Jan 27, 2008
  • Archive Re: Sucked into YWS

    Vernon and I landed in Blogs, but quickly saw that there was nothing of inerest and nobody else was there. I turned to Vernon. "Maybe we should..." A sign popped ...

    Jan 26, 2008
  • Archive Re: Sucked into YWS

    "Let's get out of here," I said. "Mabe we can go to the blogs or something. ANYTHING to get us away from here." Vernon agreed and we headed for the ...

    Jan 26, 2008
  • Archive Re: Sucked into YWS

    I shrugged at Vernon and grabbed a shiny silver sword that was lying by my feet. "To the death?" he asked. I snorted. "Yeah right. I'm not doing anything to ...

    Jan 26, 2008
  • Archive Re: Sucked into YWS

    I pulled open a large gate and ran into the castle, panting. My hair began to reduce in size, causing a minor pain, but nothing too big. There was one ...

    Jan 26, 2008
  • OOC Archive Re: Sucked into YWS Discussion

    Can you only talk to people in the same section as you, or can ou contact other people?

    Jan 26, 2008
  • Archive Re: Sucked into YWS

    Username: chocoholic Mini-animal: Mini-Horse Sucked in from: Home Landed in: Fantasy Fiction Specific: None description: Very very long blonde hair that can change length, moving tatoo of a snake on ...

    Jan 26, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: How to make reviewers hate you...

    That was so cool! 13. When you critique, critique like this, 'That was absolue rubbish. If you want to read brilliant writing, read my story...'

    Jan 26, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: hey from australia

    Hello Traveller! Welcome to YWS! So... you're a mucisian, are you? What instrument do you play, or do you sing? Do you write lyrics? If you do, there's a whole ...

    Jan 25, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello every one

    Welcome! What type of things do you like to write and read? How long hve you been writing for? The best thing you can do on here is to critique ...

    Jan 25, 2008


As I grow older, I pay less attention to what men say. I just watch what they do.
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