chocoholic

Haha! Funny. I love that song. You know, the ducation one? Don't know what it's called. Yeah... that one. Ahhhhh, good times, good times.

Awesome idea! I commented on bigbadbear's profile. His comments on one of my stories have been really great, and he's an all round great member, always helping people out and ...

I write better while listening to music. I always lisen to popular stuff. Nothing released before 1999. Although I have noticed that nobody else seems to listen to it on ...

That was really sweet. I loved how you formatted it. We use to curl up on the couch and watch blues clues until the streetlights came on. He use to ...

1/2/08 Well, the first chapter of Their End of the World is up. Maybe I'm expecting too much but it's been up for a few hours and no crit's! I'd ...

That was really sweet! I couldn't find any mistakes, I just think that you should spend a bit more time on your charaters. They seemed a bit inconsistent to me, ...

This is my novel for NaNoWriMo, finally up. The chapters are very long (about 3000 words), and I'm going to post the whole thing in thie thread, one chapter at ...

So I've been back at school for a few days, and I think this is my first time on since then. It seemed to be okay last year, but even ...

(Thirteen years old) “I hate you!” I screamed at Dad. “I hate you, I hate you, I hate you!” Dad just laughed and patted me on the head. His rough ...

Argh! It sounds really good apart from one of the things it's including. I'm an arachnaphobic, so if could tell me what parts don't include... yeah... I'll read those. Sorry, ...

29/1/08 Alainna- Cool. Thanks a lot. I've edited the first two chapters (just so you know) Well, I finsihed editing Their End of the World and, because I'm feeling evil ...

I think this was sweet, but it didn't flow very well. I think it would be better as a short story, or maybe a letter. I liked the last line, ...

I'd love crit's on the first three Chapter of How You Break My Heart. Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Thanks, choco.

Two things: 1. The rules state that you have to review two things before you post your own work, and then it's polite to keep the ratio 2:1. It's polite ...

Okay. Please double space your work. I can't read that, and nobody else will want to (at least, very few people will want to). Let me know when you fix ...