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(Sixteen years old) I sat in my Science class, doodling in my open workbook. Next to me, Olivia hurriedly took down notes. Glancing at my watch, I yawned quietly and ...

My NaNoWriMo feels very under-critted. I'd really appreciate it if you would do this for me.

Loads of Congrats Ari! You'll do great.

Thanks Keek. It was great to see how smebody else plotted. When it comes to writing down your plot, I like to start with a skeleton. First off I write ...

Ooh! Yay! I'd love a crit on Their End of the World. SO far I've only got the first chapter, and nobodies critiqued it, which makes me sad. I'd especially ...

Hi I really liked this. Your writing tyle is very good. The only things that I can really comment on are your lack of descriptions and the abrupt 'I have ...

I vary. It usually depends on the story. Some will feel better being written on paper, whereas some just feel right if I type them. I find editing is easier ...

I'm learning Japanese! Not very good at the moment, but you can only get better (I think). So yeah, I'll do it, if you want.

When if more of Ahoy Insanity coming up? I've read a bit of Ten Years, Twenty Eight Days, but I sort of stopped. I will have to read it more.

Congrats Via!

I wasn't able to get onto the site since I wok up till about half an hour ago. I got the sessions thing. Sorry, I didn't think to copy it, ...

6/2/08 I've posted the first chapter of Thier End of the World, but nobodie's critiqued it! I posted the whole chapter, which is pretty long, so if you want me ...

I just got home and I'm absolutely and completely stuffed. I have History homework (due tomorrow and not started), maths homework, health homew work (again, due tomorrow and not started), ...

This really isn't my thing, but my little brother wanted a story about werewolves for his birthdy, so I did my best. I would really appreciate any comments you can ...

What was the point of this? Nothing happened. It was just a girl writing in her diary in a completely neutral tone. I couldn't even tell if she wa angry, ...