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Yay! We are like, so great!

Yay! One year! I can't wait till my one year anniversary. Congrats on lasting this long!

Congrats Cowgirl! 8000 points? Wow!

I love that movie! Name: Skye Bale (Pronouced Bail) Age: 16 Gang: White kids Race: White Appearance: Pale skin, thin, blonde hair, blue eyes, pink lips, short, very skinny, two ...

Yep, this is a novel. 14 chapters! Thank you so much for your critiques. I can't edit right now, but I should be able to soon. You're right about the ...

Yay! It's up! Sorry I didn't get around to it straight away. My laptop is dead and I'm using my dad's, but I haven't been able to get on until ...

Yep, you totally need a life. Like, dude, when they handing out lives, I don't know ehere you were, but you obviously arrived late.

Perfect! I'm a new reader, and I just copied it into a word document. I'll edit as I read, and then answer the questions at the bottom. who's should be ...

I liked it. I think I read your ther one, but I'm not sure. I couldn't catch any mistakes, and overall it's a very good piece. I was a little ...

Hey, I'd love some more crit's on How You Break My Heart. There's five chapters so far. Here are the links: Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Chapter ...

Yay! More! Sorry I didn't get around to it sooner, school and stuff... Anyway, I liked this bit. The first part really just explained to us what was happening, this ...

Very nice. Is school really like this for some people? Wow! Fights at my school ae really just girls screaming at each other so this is... wow! I noticed that ...

Sorry I haven't read it yet Valor! School and stuff... very busy. But I WILL get around to it soon. Promise. =_= I have hit the ultimate block: boredom. To ...

The name that instantly jumps to mind is Taylah, perhaps Jackson as a last name. I like the description, be sure to tell me if you se the girl in ...

Loose- Bike gangs aren't the only shootings we get. There was a highly publicised one in the city last year. But it's true, there's much less in Australia. I was ...