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Andrea I walked into the hotel, my hands lingering on the gold doorhandles. I took off my sunglasses and approached the desk. "Harrison," I said to the man behind it, ...

Name: Andrea Harrison Age: 21 Occupation/title: A well known clothes designer from England Appearance: Tall, skinny, red hair down to her waist, pale skin, blue eyes and red lips History: ...

Any Soap Orera fans here? It's scary in my school because pretty much everyone is obsessed with Neightbours and Home & Away, when I can't stand them. EastEnders is my ...

The enclosure hummed with noise, limelight’s shone forth from neon lamps and various perfumes and other bodily smell emanated off the people. I would write, The enclosure hummed with noise. ...

I don't see anything wrong with using swearing in dialouge. I swear, almost al of my friends swear. It's a common and normal thing to do, although it may not ...

It was a beautiful dawn. The morning sun was drifting up lazily over the mountains, and the air was cool and refreshing. At the outskirts of the mountain range was ...

I haven't been diagnosed with depression, nor do I want to, but I know I have many of the symptoms through my mum, who knows a lot about it. I ...

Hey everyone! This group sounds cool, huh?

I's neither. It's always been called a soft drink, or simply coke, lemonade, fanta etc., over here.

Well, I have three left that I have to do. Please post more! I want another star, which means I need about 30 more critiques.

(Nineteen years old) “Bye Josie!” I hugged Rosa tightly. She was much better off then she was three years ago, married for a year with a baby coming in a ...

Well, at least it's started to act like Autumn here now. Although it's still feels like it;s in the 30's-40's at times. It's not Summer, despite what the weather seems ...

,” Esten said calmly I would replace this Esen with she. You do this quite a bit. don’t ge get send tha that honoured My word is saying that this ...

mewling Maybe it's just me, but I have never seen this word in my life. “Come in, then,” she said finally. The two souls, still tightly twined around each other, ...

Because I want this to be the best story I can make it, Thanks a lot!