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Does poetry also mean lyrics? I'm looking for some critiques on a song I wrote. If you can't do lyrics, that's fine, but I'd really like it if you could ...

I don't know if you do lyrics (you didn't speciffy). I'd love it if you could take a look at this song I wrote. I don't really care what you ...

Just so you know, lyrics have never been my thing, and I think this it horrid, but it's the best song I've ever written. It was inspired by Dance With ...

Just wondering, how long does the piece have to be and when is it due in?

Why do you have to hare with your sister? I'm stuck with my brother because we got another student this year.

I'd love to do that! It souds great.

First of all, I find this very insulting. hings get lost in translation, but that's not to say whoever translated it just wrote whatever he wanted. And I don't think ...

All I know is, guns are banned in Australia and not the US. And we're always hearning of shootings in America, whereas you never hear of anything like that over ...

They're showing a series on FOX8, but I don't know if it's the one they're showing in AMerica now. There's some guy from Australia in it, that's all I know, ...

Hello Morgan, Welcome to YWS! I hope you like t here. We don't bite, and everybody's really friendly. If you need anything, feel free to PM me or one of ...

I've done all my critiques apart from OverEasy's (I'll do it later today). After that I'll be done, unless you post more piece's for me to critique. I would be ...

mundane I don't like the use of this word. So far you seem to be conveying cookies as a wonderful thing, and now you go and say that they're nothing ...

I'm ba-ack!!! The ladder, shuddering; I don't understand this bit I think it should be, The ladder shuddered; over his- calculating green eyes Why the -? It really eems to ...

Andrea I woke up at six pm, and headed down to the reasturant, after re-applying my make-up and changing into a slinky green dress, of course. I sat down at ...

I like Leona Lewis, but I've only heard Bleeding Love so far. Today I'm going to buy her album for my sister for her birthday, which is also good for ...