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An easy mistake to make, I suppose. That statement means that you can post about how your novel is going, what issues you are having and so on, and perhaps ...

Hi, This really isn't the right place to post this. Either put it in Advanced Critiques, or post it bit by bit in the correct fiction forum. The Writers Corner ...

Does anybody want a critique? I have 1 1/2 weeks off and I need something to do. Give me your lonely stories.

Wow! Only one review. But I'm here now, like I promised. I really liked how you structured this. I love looking at different styles, and how you've done this reminds ...

I'd love a crit on the story I just wrote for Jared's Message contest. Memos of Bleeding Hearts Thanks!

This is for Jared's Message contest. Reviews are greatly appreciated! Memos of Bleeding Hearts Dear Mum, I’m leaving. I’m sorry, but I can’t stay in that house. Not with Dad ...

I kept meaning to critique this, but I only just now have gotten time to do it. I wish my critique could be as good as some of the others, ...

Welcome Ethan! I think Mesh pretty much covered the 2:1 thing, so I won't go into that (just make sure you stick to it) I live in Australia too, in ...

I need more!!! I'm sorry, but I really need more of Lyla, it's killing me waiting. When is more coming?

Hey! I'm here, as promised. Sorry it took me so long. I've read the first five, an I just want to quickly say that they're pretty good, but cliche, as ...

silverSUNLIGHTx Fist of all how do you get that custom title I think it's called? The writing under your name. You can pick a custom title once you're a novelist, ...

Conversations, reading, big issues at the moment (eg. Abortion is in the news a lot where I live, and I recently had an idea that has to do with abortion), ...

Well, I'm here as promised. Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing this, I've been busy. But I'm here now, and I'll do my best to ...

I sent me answers... :cry:

There's one thing I'd like to point out before I start this critique. Here at YWS we ask that for every piece of your own work you post, you also ...