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This was really sweet. You captured the emotion perfectly, and I almost cried! Sorry I can' be of more help. The one thing I can say is your formatting. It's ...

CHAPTER THREE “Don’t be so modest, Carrie,” William said. “You’re very good. I’ve seen you.” I glared at him. “Thank you,” I said through clenched teeth. “But I’m really not ...

I liked this. I could put it to music pretty simply. It's a simple song, but it says a lot. The songs I wrote on my beaten up guitar Reflect ...

I'm listening to her album now. It's really good. Can't say Bleeding Love is my favourite, I like Homeless. But I've only listened to each song once, so I can't ...

This is SICK! How could anybdy do this? It's like the guys in Werribie who beat and raped a mentally-challenged girl and then sold the DVD at school. What is ...

Hey. I'm not very good at lyrics, but I'll try my best. First of all, I had real trouble putting this song to a tune in my head. And when ...

Would it be alrgith if I wrote another one, even though my article was published in the April edition? I want to interview JC.

I'd like to sart off by say poetry isn't my best thing, so you may just want to ignore this crit. But overall there isn't any emotion. I read it, ...

Yay! And my article is in it! I'm so happy!

I'm afraid my eyes skimmed the beginning, but what I read (from the start of the dialogue), it was really good. Very vivid, and a little creepy. I was a ...

First of all, in English please? Maths is one of my wrst subjects, second only to Sciene. Plus I'm only in year nine. But what I could understand was cool. ...

On the bottom shelf of the small old wooden shelf up in my Grand-ma’s attic sat a small rusty metal box with a tiny lock on it. On the either ...

I used to download from Limewire, stopped because it was using up a lot of inernet to download songs. However, I don't think it's bad thing. A lot of songs ...

I liked this. I got a bit of a tune going on it, and I thought it was a little different from a lot of popular music, but still close ...

Is Reading a lost art? I like it! I once did 'Do Ghosts exist?' Don't know if that will be alright. I can tell you what I said. It wasn't ...