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It was... interesting. I found it a little boring, but at the same time I liked it. Your main character (Emmett, or something, right?) is interesting. Mentally retarted, yes? I ...

What even happens after you get in?

How do you get in?

The Sanctum has been cracked! O.O What?! You mean someone's got it?

Well, it was good in the first bit, but then I just got confused. How do they tie in together? R2D2 and C3PO Celebrities? Are these by any chance from ...

seventy two souls chocoholic YWS sanctum seventysoulstwo All dud passwords! This is killing me!

Well, I know nothing about art, so I'll just tell you what I think. I really like the colour, it starts with t, if I remember correctly. But I don't ...

:shock: I'm totally confused

I tried to get my first novel published, but I didn't really have much experience and I was doing everything wrong. I don't think you should. Have a few practise ...

Haha! I used to love that song when I was younger. Now I can't stand it! I hate this song. I hate this song. Soooo funny! Unfortunately that song was ...

It depends on the novel and the characters. Who is the target audience? Remember that kids know swear words from a very early age (even in prep people knew the ...

Oh, oh. Me me me me me me me me me me me me me!!!!!!!!!!!

I think this is a very tricky issue. I think you'e right about it not being a detterent, Heidigirl. We don't have it here in Australia, and you rarely ever ...

Yay! More JC. Hah, sorry, I'm bored. 1. What do you think so far? Is it moving along? Are you bored? 2. What about the characters so far? 3. I've ...

I realize that being very critical of your own work is a crucial part of being a good writer, is doubting the fact that you should keep writing a good ...