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  • Writing Tips Re: Writing Deadlines

    Does anybody set them? I know NaNoWriMo is kind of a deadline, but does anybody say, 'okay, this piece must be finished by the -- of --'? I never did, ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Storybook ideas?

    Not horror or anything, but I like kitty15's idea of having it based around people involved in a crime. I'd join that.

    May 10, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Like your Lyrics?

    So I've noticed that the lyrics section has become a lot more popular, but not many people seem to offer reviews on them. I've developed a bit of a talent ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Lyrics Re: Fly

    I liked this. It was sweet and emotional, but it was more about the music and lyrics than about emotions. I had trouble putting a god tune to your verses, ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Will Review For Food Re: Questions about "Will Review for Food"

    My thread died and I tried to get people to post again, but they didn't. My question is, can I make a new thread? It wouldn't be for anything, just ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: The Humor of Sanctum

    I like this one: You have encountered Daughter of the Devil which lunges at you with Sinfully Good Looks EDIT: I just got this one: You have encountered Chocoholic which ...

    May 9, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What are you reading at the moment?

    I finsihed Hwo To Be Good by Nick Hornby last night. I'll probably read another one of his books or Mansfield Park today.

    May 8, 2008
  • General Articles Re: A Commentary on the Evolution of Musical Taste

    I thought this was well written, but like has been said before me, not much wias in there. here are artists of today who do make music for the joy ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Boredom game :D

    Yes. I hate science homework. I'm wearing black stockings.

    May 8, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Don't you just hate it when...

    Yeah. I've had that. Fortunately everybody on YWS is great, and most of the critiques I recieve make me depressed rather than annoyed (okay not so great. But still- they're ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Don't you just hate it when...

    It eat's up your posts? I just finished writing a really long review, and then my hand accidently slipped and went back, deleting the entire thing! It's so annoying when ...

    May 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Just One More Donut Penny…

    It had been exactly seven days, four hours, sixteen minutes, and one billion nanoseconds since she had started her diet. Great opening! The only thing I would comment on , ...

    May 7, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: puppy!

    Aww... he's so cute. I love dogs... except my own. I really want a golden retreiver. He looks a bit big for a puppy, though. I think the photo would ...

    May 5, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Circus Pirates 5

    Here I am, here I am. “Landon!” Henry said. I'd put in some emotion here. Happliy? Something like that. The chimpanzee I did not expect that. So, in case you ...

    May 5, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Circus Pirates 4

    “Well, I’ll watch the helm,” Kross said to Henry. “I was a Captain’s mate when I was a younger lad. I probably have the most ship smarts around here,” he ...

    May 5, 2008


I will not allow my life's light to be determined by the darkness around me.
— Sojourner Truth