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You are sick, man! It's like you don't want me to sleep! “I stole the Ouija board that we used a few nights ago. I didn’t plan on using it ...

But- but- you said this one wasn't scary! It was terrifying! Or maybe that's just because it's 11:15 at night and I'm the only one awake in the house, but ...

This was very different, indeed. Personally, I like it as it is. I don't think you need to add more. There's a certain feeling of detachment if you just leave ...

Well, I'm here. I have to say, I liked this one a lot more than the first one. It was less... spiritualistic. I guess because they weren't actually playing it, ...

Hey, Can you critique my new piece Gossip and Lies ? Thanks, choco. PS- Let me know if there's anything I can crit for you.

The idea for this short story came to me in the shower, and I hurried to write it down. It's about how rumours can destroy somebodies life. It's partly based ...

Well, it took a while, but I'm here now and ready to critique. I only skimmed the other critiques, so forgive me if I repeat anything. -- There were seven ...

Kara gave her order of mains to the waiter and he left the table looking disturbed. Kara sighed. Timothy and Jonathan had been best friends for years, but sometimes they ...

Jonathan and Kara Thorne grabbed hands and ran through the parting in the crowd that had gathered in the park. Kara's small body was donned with a white dress and ...

Again, I'm girl so sorry, but I have strong opinions on some of the c*** that girls do. I HATE girls who dumb themselves down or forget their values for ...

Doctor Who, Torchwood, SJA, My Family, Only Fools and Horses, Still Standing, The Simpsons, Family Guy, Mr. Bean, Kyle XY Those are pretty much the shows I watch, although there's ...

I found it by just typing in Doctor Who into Google images. I think it's from The Unicorn and the Wasp. Sorry, no links. I'm sad because I am so ...

In year 7 we had to read book called Galax-Arena. It was totally random and confusing and just made me think: Why are we studying this in school ?

The Doctor and Donna Noble outside the TARDIS. I'm so sad.

I'm here, as you asked. To answer your question, I thought it was a man and a woman arguing about the man being lazy after hosting a dinner arty. It's ...