chocoholic

This is an idea that's been floating around my head for a while, and when we were watching Scrubs in History I, instead of putting myself through that pain, wrote ...

I actually think I might enjoy this. Because of my mum's job, I know a lot about scizophrenia, so if you need any help, I can probably tell you the ...

I quite liked it. It was short, but it was interesting. What's the lone adjective? I can't spot it, although I'm not good at that sort of thing. Now, onto ...

I can't believe this! It's sick. A pregnancy pact ? Don't these girls understand what it will be like to raise a child at such a young age?

Yay! The second part is up! The first thing though, it's not double spaced, which makes reading it very annoying. Reckon you could double space it, just for me? Now, ...

I can't stand it, and I haven't even seen it. My sister saw it at a friends, borrowed the CD and made it her goal to learn every single song. ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here and find everybody very helpful. Second, here on YWS we have a 2:1 policy. That is ...

chocoholic walked into the bar and ordered a hot chocolate, before walking out in an angry frenzy when she was told they didn't have them.

I made it! I wanted 400 reviews by July 1, and I got there beforehand. Now I want 50 critiques by July 31. I think I can do that.

Well, you seem to have gotten a lot of detailed critiques on your actual writing (I only skimmed the critiques, so sorry if I repeat anything), so I'll just give ...

I read this before I went to school, but I didn't have time to critique it, so here I am now! I hope I do it justice. Pete drank, and ...

I like this. I'm afraid I can't give much in the way of a critique, but that's because this piece was so good. The one thing I will say is ...

niteowl pointed out the spelling and grammar mistakes, which means I can focus on the actual song. Just a question to start off with, is this your first song? It ...

That is awesome!

Don't ask them if they've read it or if they're taking you, just ask for conformation that they have recieved it. Of all the agents/publishers I've looked at, that's what ...