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I thought this was okay. It's not my favourite piece, but i was pretty sweet. I had a lot of trouble with it at the beginning. There wasn't any showing, ...

Cool. I like the idea of mixing up a bunch of fairy tales, I've never seen if done before. Have you heard of Jasper Fforde? I've never read any of ...

Wow! This random work thing is really useful, I never would have even glanced at this if it weren't for that. I like your title, most of all. There's something ...

First of all, here on YWS we have a two for one review policy, and we ask that all new member make two reviews before posting anything of their own. ...

Interesting. Here are my comments/nitpicks: wants some of I would remove the some . It detracts from the strength of the piece. Your bit on immorality is very powerful, especially ...

Interesting. I've never seen anything from biblical times up here, or much fiction set there, so this was nice to see. It was a bit short but I liked it. ...

I love it! I've already seen two of my pieces up there!

This went really, really fast, which made it quite boring. Nothing much seemed to be going on, and I kept reading while saying to myself, 'Just finish it'. There's nothing ...

That's gorgeous! Is it really you? Do you loo like you did as a baby? You don't look like a newborn, though. Maybe 9-18 months old? I love the little ...

But if you remove the guns from the people who need protecting, you're also removing them from the people who use them to kill. Look at the amount of school ...

Well most of the dreams I can remember from today are generally about me finishing homework that is actually due the next day but I haven't finished, but I can ...

A small debate has arised in one f the news stories, so I've decided to make a thread for it. We all know America hasn't made guns illegal, but what ...

The world is a much better place in countries where firearms are illegal. One of the problems with making firearms illegal is that criminals tend to ignore gun laws. In ...

They have gun laws, but you can't deny people the right to bear firearms. Yes you can. It's illegal to own a gun here, and it's very hard to get ...

I'm confused. Are people in America allowed guns? If so, it's crazy. Look at all the school shootings, why they haven't introduced gun laws is beyond me, this stuff just ...