chocoholic

You are amazing! Absolutely amazing. I wish I could write like you. *bows and chants* Teach me, oh great one! Now, I did actually pick up a couple of mistakes ...

Okay, I just found this after reviewing your first chapter. But it's not like I missed out on anything big. Like I said with chapter one, you need more description. ...

I don't read much Romance, but I liked your title and decided to have a look. As for your overall story, I think you've introduced everything a bit too fast. ...

Wow! That's really beautiful. I can't draw well to save my life, but I really liked this. I wish I could draw that. The face seemed a little squashed up, ...

Hello ilikepenguins, and welcome to YWS! I ope you're having fun on the site so far. Before I start your critique, I'd like to point out to you that we ...

Yay! Another song! I was going to critique this last night, but I was too tired. But, here I am! I wonder if some of this, particularly Che's bit, isn't ...

This was really good, and so true. Although I don't live in the UK (I'm stuck in Australia until I'm old enough to move there permanently), we are in the ...

Flicker

These are really cool. They're really clear and so cute. And despite not being much of a cat person, your cat is gorgeous! I love her! How many dogs do ...

Wow! That was... wow! I agree with 3B, and original Sam production. [quote=BigBadBear]genshibakudan What the fluff does that mean? [/quote] It's Japanese for atomic bomb. Although I don't really know ...

I had a rel problem with this as a song. I didn't feel anything, I couldn't hear a tune, or even the beginnings of a rhythm. I think it would ...

That was really cool. It's how the mind would think, I reckon, and the ending was perfect. There were a couple of things I noticed: Self-consciously I look at my ...

Well the first word sounds forgen, but the second makes it sound like a person dealing with events. I might buy it, if the blurb was good. Loose Ends

Wow! That was really good! You're so getting a gold star for that! She didn’t answer the man and his question. This sounds a bit odd. The man and his ...

The pictures are really big so they stretch the screen. They were also on their side, which made it hard to see them. All the photo's seemed really out of ...