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Re: "Double Dad" Chapter 2
Short but Sweet. I love it how you're writing each chapter through a different person. Off to read chapter three.
May 31, 2007 -
Re: Oh, Corrie 1
This was REALLY good. I enjoyed it a lot. It slowed down after the prolouge, and you conveyed the emotions really well. I'm going to go and read the next ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: "Double Dad" prologue
OK, I think how you wrote was good, but it seemed quite fast. I wasn't really sure of what was going on, or is it just me? I'll go and ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: Summer Carding in: The Ameythest necklace
Hey, I really enjoyed this story. There were some spelling and puncuation mistakes I saw, but overall it was really good. I love the plot, it's so engaging, and you're ...
May 31, 2007 -
Re: New and excited!
Hi everybody! My name's Rosie and I'm new to this site, but I really want to start. I love writing and reading and have been doing it for years. I ...
May 31, 2007