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When I'm writing something I know I'll turn into a novel, I get my mum to read it after I finish each chapter. She doesn't write much, and she doesn't ...

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Here's Riley again! I sat on a bar stool and sipped my martini when I noticed a frightened looking girl walk in. She was kind of pretty, with brown hair ...

Another great chapter, but I really don't know if I can wait six weeks. It will be hard, definetely, but maybe I can do it! Like others have said, the ...

Riley Funk Female 17 Attempted suicide at 15 Anorexic from ages 12-14 Very outgoing Blonde hair Blue eyes Spotless, pale skin Popular Loads of boyfriends- currently going out with 1 ...

I couldn't care less- Carmen, Moving Too Fast It sucks- Sister of Mine What do you dream of at night?

Ok. This piece, no offence, is really creeepy. It doesn't mean yo're a bad writer, it just means you might want to try and soften the story a bit, unless ...

This is just something I wrote quickly that highlights our feelings of jealousy and the want to be someone else. Please let me know what you think. I stood, staring ...

Nice. Very nice. The only mistake I could find was when you wrote seven-teen. You don't need the - in there. Just write seventeen. The plot is a little confusing. ...

Another great chapter. The only thing I didn't like about it wad the wait!!! But I know how it feels. I have an important scholarship test tomorrow and I've done ...

Interesting, interesting. The relationship between Taj and Kath is growing. I liked how you brought back the three thing. There hasn't been mention of that in this one until now... ...

This is sweet, but it ends quite fast. Is it done, or is there more coming? Leah seems to have an okay relationship with her mother. They really do seem ...

Gina comes round on Saturday night for a sleepover. She only calls a few minutes before she comes, so I’m still wearing my pyjamas and I don’t even have time ...

Music is about half my life. Feel free to PM me with Genre of music, any particular artists. I focus on the more modern artists, so I won't be able ...

That was funny! I couldn't cork out what this line was though: when eye strike a quay or right a word