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  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley Ninen's mother sat across from me in the waiting room. She seemed mad that they wouldn't let her in or tell her what was wrong with her daughter, and ...

    Jul 19, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley "Don't worry about your mum coming, only I have your phone number and address." "How did you get in?" Ninen asked. "I let out the truth, well, half of ...

    Jul 19, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley I was in a daze as I sat in the backseat of Dylan's car and he drove wildly to the hospital. It was a miracle he didn't get pulled ...

    Jul 17, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley I rested my elbows on the bench as Roxy, Olivia and Kasey entered. "Hey Ri," Kasey said, leaning over the bar and hugging me. "How are ya?" "What do ...

    Jul 17, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Such a Pretty Girl

    Sounds Good. Whose it by?

    Jul 17, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Cake, dragons and ... doughnuts

    Hi Miriam. Welcome to YWS. I'm taking you like writing, otherwise why would you be on here? I hope you like it here, and feel free to PM me if ...

    Jul 15, 2007
  • Archive Re: Reunited

    Lela I sat quietly against the hard wall, the clod floor stinging my un-shod feet. I tried to ignore the ropes cutting into my wrist as I brought my crying ...

    Jul 15, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley I got to the nightclub 15 minutes before I was due to start work. I quickly changed into a short black skirt and a tight black t-shirt and sat ...

    Jul 15, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Sure thing author13 Riley Ninen grabbed my arm and pulled my off the road, just as a blurred truck went by. "What the hell were you thinking?" Ninen screamed at ...

    Jul 14, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: Speak

    I've been trying to find a copy of this. I read Catalyst and really enjoyed it.

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Media Reviews Re: My Sister's Keeper

    I want to read this, but I just borrowed eight books from the library. Once I have finished all of those (plus Deception Point and Digital Fortress) I am so ...

    Jul 13, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Finding Exactly What You Need

    Grace sat at her computer, the blank screen staring up at her. She sighed, and began playing with the pen on her desk, rolling it up and down and doodlling ...

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley Kevin looked shocked, but Max just stood there, doing nothing. "Why the hell aren't you going home?!" Kevin exploded, storming all over the place. "Reasons that have nothing to ...

    Jul 13, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley I jumped up and down and hugged Ninen. "That's so cool! Well, what do you want to do with the rest of the day?" Ninen shrugged. "We could go ...

    Jul 12, 2007
  • Archive Re: Typical Teenagers

    Riley I rang Ninen as soon as I got out of the bar. "Guess what!" I screamed into the phone. "I got a job as a bar girl!" "Wow, that ...

    Jul 11, 2007


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