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Check out the Japanese Culture Club and maybe the Manga and Anime Group. If you need anything else, I have a Japanese student living with me so if you hurry ...

This is something that you should figure out for yourself, or it may be something that will reveal itself as you write. I would suggest that you d some research ...

More great writing! And for somebody who thinks these types of celebrities get way to much media attention who doing stupid things and is very interested in the drug world, ...

This is really good. I loved your tone and how it was half fiction/half non-fiction. I don't know a lot about ballet, despite having lived with ballerinas for years and ...

Hi. Before I critique this I'd like to tell you about our two for one reviewing policy here. I see that you've already posted something and only done one review. ...

Wow! I didn't critique it because it was really good. Like, really good. he only thing I have to say is, it really began to confuse me near the end. ...

It's kind of cute, but they don't really look like they're in love or anything. I reckon this would look better as a cartoon with love hearts in the eyes ...

There's a series I like called The Royal Diaries, which are fictional diaries by famous princesses from history. I have one about Anastasia, who was one of the sisters. There's ...

This was pretty good. A light, fun read that I enjoyed. I like Kate even though we're polar opposites. (Okay, so I've done some bad stuff too, but not that ...

This was okay. Not the best thing I've read, but it's not terrible. It's a little random, but it's good for a laugh. I thought the ending was really funny. ...

Well, I'm not exactly sure what you want, but if you want to learn how to space your paragraphs like this: Hello," she said. "Hello," he replied. that's easy enough. ...

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To be honest, this wasn't the best piece of writing I've seen. There were a lot of mistakes (easy to pick up if you go through it carefully but I'll ...

That's really cool! I loved it. It looks really strange is you zone into the middle with your eyes and then bring them back out to see the whole picture. ...

These are great. I wish I could draw like you. Mini Cooper- Not my favourite, but that's just my personal taste. It really does look like a car. Crane- I ...