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Read the book of Revelations. Don't try to read the Bible. I'm very slowly slogging my way through it. Some good stories, however, The Birth of Jesus, Abraham and Sarah, ...

Unless you’re a supernatural being from another world, you would, at some point in your life, have contracted writers block. Even if you only started writing regularly yesterday, do you ...

OMG! I loved it Ari. There was so much feeling. I didn't understand the last bit, screaming my name to the dead? Shouldn't it be to the death? It's great ...

I want to get some of my short stories and poems published in a magazine of something, but I don't know of any in Australia. I've been looking and looking ...

Well your stuff is weird, so HA! And my life is not boring. Oh, wait. It is. It's really, really b...o...r...i...n...g. Not unlike yours, but at least you get to ...

First of all, I liked the plot. Daughter abandoned by mother, then goes to live with her half-sister(?) and family. Becomes depressed and dies. But the actual writing could use ...

Hmm... I'm sorry, but this was cruedly written. It had a good plot, but you didn't pull off the writing of it. Show rather than tell. There was a lot ...

One of the scariest words in the world of writing- I’ve found- is research. Yes, that dreaded word that strikes fear in ones heart! But if you want to write ...

Thanks for the crits. I made some changes.

It was cool. A little weird and creepy, but good. So, the woman was old all along, but she was trying to trick herself into thinking that she was beautiful? ...

I loved this. It was sweet, without being sentimental, and sad. The flow of emotion and wording was just right. It was like, the girl knew she had made mistakes ...

Granted, but it's burnt toast. I wish I didn't have to go to school tomorrow.

Okay, so you’ve been a member for three days now and you’ve posted your first story/poem. Now you’re waiting for all those critiques to come flooding in, telling you how ...

In the early fall, my father and I (make father a capital F) sprinkled gasoline over an (Capital S) offering of rotting wood, (Capital O) anointing it without blessing; (Capital ...