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Wow thinks for editing it and making it longer, I kept thinking of what would she say to Adelica. I like your decision better though, mine all came out corny. ...

Okay to be honest this was a little slow in the beginning. But then in the middle when there in the basement was a turning point for me. I liked ...

Wow I had a charlie horse, because I was laughing so hard!! I loved this, and adding Sam, was pretty good too. I mean no one could start a fight ...

I thought it seems intresting, even though it's really short, just make a really long one to make up for it. Oh and by the way you just made my ...

Thanks for the review, I feel kind of silly taking this long to type something so short. :oops: But hey. Thanks for the tips Moo! I hope I will be ...

Hey I know this is kind of late, :oops: but I was looking through all of the fan fiction and saw yours. I've always been a fan of Harvest Moon ...

Rain "Whoa watch where your going!" a very aggravated voice shrieked. "Sorry." I mumbled. "Then get off of me." "Oops sorry." I manged as I stood up slightly bruised up ...

Okay here's my real review sorry about the short one yesterday. Okay ti start this off I liked how she thought about him leaving her. How could he be so ...

. Sorry this will be a short review I'm really tired and had a busy day. I'll try to come back and review more when I have time Oh my ...

:smt027 Holy Guacamole!! What happens! What happens! When I was reading this I thought this chapter was going to focus around Jess, and April's friendship. And then you open a ...

Me again!! I like how you add this other part that way it doesn't seem like just like some teenager wishing that she could be in Darren Shawn's world. You ...

I liked it I know what you mean. I'll try to play this game and my person always catches on fire so I never get past the first day, before ...

I loved it!! :D I know what you mean when you said that it left so many possibilities, and you just keep imagining different characters in their world. I'm in ...

Okay for the record I went and read the whole story before seeing the bottom about this being the second chapter. I think maybe you should put that on the ...

Thank you for the review I understand what you mean about the beat. I think that's the last song I'll write, because I just for some reason just can't really ...